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the experiment by Detkef the experiment by Detkef
finals for my perspective class :)

had to make a two page comic showing of different types of perspective. decided not to put in any dialogue, it doesn't really need it.

I was thinking about making a full comic out of the plot, does it look promising?
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:iconjayswing96:
jayswing96 Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Totally. I'm just on the edge of m seat for what's next. What happened to him? How did he get into that situation?
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jessesbv Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
Just to clarify; I'm no expert. If you can come up with a fresh story line that really draws the reader in, I'd say 'go for it.'
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:iconjessesbv:
jessesbv Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
Rogue cyborgs are kind of an overused plot, but the work itself is very nice!
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Silent-Lurkers Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
Awesome work!
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:iconcourtbaker:
courtbaker Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Student Photographer
It looks awesome! It is very promising! (and I love the wolverine type jump in the last panel :3 )
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:iconhippymcscallywag:
HIPPYmcscallywag Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Student Artist
he has very nice bandages
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:icondncbrules:
dncbrules Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very promising!
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:icontriphon:
Triphon Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013
Thrilling work!
I think "Poorest security protocol ever!" is likely to be this unlucky scientist's last thoughts.
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DxRhym Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013   Digital Artist
Hell yes it looks promising!
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:iconorango:
Orango Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
That's the Green Goblin from Spiderman's plot mate :p
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:iconchelseadanger:
ChelseaDanger Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely work! Definitely peaks my interest, I would love to see more. c:
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:iconitsdigit4l:
itsDigit4l Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
By any chance were these drawings inspired by The Hidden Source Mod?
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:iconawesomeponytail:
AwesomePonyTail Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is just mind blowing. So many different perspectives and yet not going overboard. Good work! :clap:
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IllEatYourself Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It does look promising. In fact, you could make a full comic out of this. Try integrating it into the story of Zombie Waffe. Then I'll be happy (seriously, you really need to update that comic a lot more often).
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Bast-et Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Your perspective work is wonderful. It makes the limited color scheme appear dynamic and adds to the atmosphere of the piece as a whole. I'd love to see more.
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azraelballard Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very promising. Feel like "Monster" by Skillet would be a good song for this.
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:iconobliviousnight:
Obliviousnight Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
Looks like the classic "human experiment goes wrong", but it looks very interesting nontheless. Also, I think you did a good job with the perspective and the characters themselves ^^
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BluebellDreamer Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
Yes, if you have the time, making this full comic would be awesome!!
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:iconhellsingfan101:
hellsingfan101 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
prequel for Zombie Waffe?
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:iconrandomspaznamedcyrus:
randomspaznamedcyrus Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Can you do both this and Zombie Waffe? Cause this looks very promising. Heck maybe you could tie this into zombie waffe. Make this story a prologue of ZW maybe?

Also, I've been meaning to ask, what does waffe stand for/mean?
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KlayBird Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
LOVE IT!!
You sooooooooo HAVE to make this into a comic!!

Was this inspired by 'Containment Breach'?
I've seen a little gameplay online and except for it being scientists and not prisoners in the test chamber, (and the fact that the expirement dosn't look like a scary burlap gummybear) It looks VERY promising and I hope you continue to work on this!

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Eat it up, wear it out. Make it do or do without.
Curiosity killed the cat, Satisfaction brought it back.
Save the Earth, it's the only planet with chocolate!
When in doubt, FRAG OUT!!
Pay it forward.
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Redmannine Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
I'd love to know more about this story
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:iconlmonlimecat:
LmonLimeCat Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
<3 Yes!! Do it!!! It looks wonderful. :)
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:iconbitsy83:
Bitsy83 Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
And this, boys and girls, is what happens when man plays God.
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THEDORKYWEIRDO Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow! Absolutely amazing! PROMISING!
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yzkethrag Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Neat. :I
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:iconartbymoga:
Artbymoga Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
The detail you put in each panel is amazing! Great job, I would absolutely love to read more!
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Shadowdew6 Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes! It looks very promising! I love all of their expressions, and the deatil you've managed to put in while still leaving the painted effect. Please make more! :D
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CharlieK-33 Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like. No dialogue is good, Lighting and texture... Just wow, and the perspectives are awesome! Second page soon then I take it? I'd love to see more of this. :D
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Detkef Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
sorry this is both pages, but put together!
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:iconcharliek-33:
CharlieK-33 Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Had a feeling. Still marvelous.
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:iconnoodlesuperpot:
NoodleSuperPot Featured By Owner May 19, 2013   Artist
Aah! Looks like that mod fro Half Life The Hidden :D Love it!
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:iconkuiji:
Kuiji Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It looks so exciting and I love the coloring!
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the-fialfu-kid Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
i really wanna see more of it
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:iconiastartov:
IAstartov Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
Awesome work with perspective!
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:iconhypergothic:
HyperGothic Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YES PLEASE DO this looks so awesome!
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:iconsavvyidiot:
savvyidiot Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
Am I the ONLY one who sees that this is based off of the source mod "The Hidden"?
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luca0483 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh My Guard, that so awesome, i didn't realize that!

But then again, the mechanical arm kind of threw me of the trail.
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darrenshan-fan Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
DO IT DO IT DO IT!! PLEASE!! :love: Looks epic!
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alexiuss Featured By Owner May 18, 2013
this is very delicious!
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D3N1ZFTW Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Do continue! But perhaps with the events that happened before the ones in this comic?
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:icondetkef:
Detkef Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
ofc
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:iconkippindel:
Kippindel Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Student
DOIIIIIT~! ! ! !
Prease~? ? ? ?
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:icontechno56:
Techno56 Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Student General Artist
YES continue! :D
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Thnerdinthcorner Featured By Owner May 18, 2013   Writer
Continue? Yes please. Please please please!
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:iconmercurybird:
mercurybird Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I would love it if you would continue the comic. I'm darned curious to see what happens next.
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:iconryunk:
Ryunk Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Whoa, this is amazing. The coloring is absolutely gorgeous and the perspective is amazing! Good luck on your finals!
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YAMATA12 Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Student General Artist
this is interesting, you should do the other pages to explain whats going on, who is the one with the robot arm and how did he get in that situation, well that my opinion :), anyway awesome job as always :iconbravoplz:
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TheGothicWriter Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Amazing!
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ZeIntern Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I love this so much, I can't help but think of all these questions that I want answered like...
What where the scientists trying to achieve?
Was the experiment born into being an experiment or a normal person who got kidnapped into being an experiment?
What did pulling that lever do?

But at the same time I love Zombie Waffe so much and I don't want you to drop it.

In the end they're your comics, your choice so don't feel like you have to please the people and do something you don't want to do.
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